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[melwil]

I just got a 'please review' for Tear Stains and Tooth Marks from Fiction Alley. (Really wondering why the hell I took up this stupid writing business. I hate pimping myself)

Would someone like to beta the story for me? I have to keep the story the same as it's the basis for my whole universe, but anything else would be a help.

Edited to add
The story can be found here

Apparently, I'm not much of a HP writer if I can't even make it onto FA.

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[lizbee.livejournal.com]

::blinks::

Did they say why it was rejected? I can't think of anything offhand, but I'm downloading it again as I type...

Okay, have looked it over again, but not fully, since my computer was being raped by FF.nets pop-ups. I can't see a problem, myself. Maybe I know you and your writing style too well.

[melwil.livejournal.com]

All that was said was 'please review'

I can't understand it myself. Maybe I just suck

[lizbee.livejournal.com]

Wait, did you get the standard form rejection letter, or was this a comment in your reviews forum saying "please review"? That's standard for review forums, particularly those begun by mods insted of the authors themselves.

::breathes easy::

[melwil.livejournal.com]

phew - I was getting depressed